Disarm You With a Smile

Okies.

I'm looking for a beta for a mcsmooch fic (part two to Voyage Closed and Done). it's right at 1500 words. Any takers?

I have this piece, it's about 3150 words long. and It's for ladycat777 so she can't beta. don't even try, chickie!

OT4 T/RD/RM/J

summary: After the Doppleganger episode, the team hasn't worked very well together at all. Teyla takes it upon herself to gather Rodney and Ronon and confront John to deal with the issues. And that's pretty much all the plot. It's not too terribly porny, but very sensual.

I need to know that I got their voices right, if the sensuality of the piece is too overt, if they just all need to fuck it out, or whatever.

Help would be muchly appreciated!

I totally flaked with the rounds_of_kink round 2. I had two prompts, and thought I'd be able to get them done before the move and what not, but then they totally got abandoned while I settled in with the new year at school and the new place. Well. I'm settled in now, and I'd like to get them finished.

I'm finished with the first one, a Sheppard/Ronon kink fic of "whispers in the dark". It's at 1474 words right now, and is not heavy on smut, but definitely slashy. I'd love for someone to beta read it for me and give me some fb. As it stands, it doesn't really end so much as they both wake up. I like it, but I'm definitely open to suggestion.

so umm, details:

SGA
Sheppard/Dex
Kink: whispers in the dark
rating: pg to r (nothing really overt happens, but the suggestion is there)
length: 1474

Beta points: characterization, structure, voice. Notes on situation. Hints on a title. Not so much grammar and spelling. I've pretty much got that down.

been working on my sounds_so_good fic, and I've finished it. It just needs a beta. Totally PG, well, except for language - the guys do some cussin' at each other. the pairing? Chris/Steve, with Chris/David, Steve/Jensen, and Jenses/Jared implied.

Can someone give it a good seein' to? Pretty please?

Can someone beta a very quick, gen-is but McShep piece? 'Tis very short, only about 940 words.

Okay.

As I said last night in my bitch about the world post, I am writing a little piece for yin_again for her YinAThing. Well. I've been worried that I suck and all that jazz for a while now, also been busy with school and crap. BUT I've finished the fic. It sits at just under 3000 words, and I'm so nervous about posting it.

It's an original fiction, based on a visual prompt from Yin. A BEAUTIFUL visual prompt, I might add.

I need someone to look it over and tell me if my characters are boring, if there's some more I need to reveal or cover up to keep the fic interesting, or if it's fine the way it is. Anyone up for the challenge of beta-ing for me?

*begs prettily with big blue eyes*

IN school related news:
I have been 'tentatively' offered another year at my school teaching english II. Oddly enough, not journalism. Which, when I think about it, si WONDERFUL news! So, cheer for me, congratulate me and think about beta reading.