Disarm You With a Smile

So, I have this little gen fic thingie with the wee ones, and I need a beta reader to let me know if it's okay, maybe give some con-crit/feedback on the thing.

It's also got some Papa Winchester in it. So who wants to have a gander?

I've signed up for maleslashminis this round. It's GUNN people! Yay. A character I never really write because he's tough for me to get a handle on. But I did it for the challenge and I've had a blast with it.

The fic is due (to post) on Sunday, the 11th. And I seriously need a beta for it. It's only 1438 words, and maybe even less, after I edit it a bit.

So. Can anyone help? *loves on flisties*

I'm looking for a beta. I've written a short piece (bout 1400 words) for fall for Spike, and would like someone to read over it. It's Spike/Dru, pre-season 2. Probably a bit sucky, so some input would be loverly.

Thanks y'all.

I am venturing into the arena of SGA fic with a little piece of McShep. I need a beta to catch me if I got the voices all wrong, and the ust all screwed up.

Is anyone willing to lend a hand on this for me? *begs prettily*

hey guys.

I need one of my Wesleyphile friends to give a good read through to my teeny tiny winter of wes fic(let).

Little summary: Post Five by Five. Wes comes out of the apartment where Faith has tortured him and finds Angel and Faith in the alley. My fic tries to cover the conversation that Wes and Angel had that was alluded to in Sanctuary.

I have a hard time w/ Wes voice and characterization. I'd like someone to look this over and see if I did alright. Also, I feel it's a little short and ends rather abruptly, but I can't figure out how to extend it without going into the next episode, and I didn't want to do that. So I guess I'd like to know if it's ok to leave it where it is, considering what it's supposed to be.